Can you please suggest improvement in following SOP. it's my first draft. Also suggest good conclusion paragraph.


I have 5 years of experience in software development, mostly all in web technologies. I want to purse Masters in Computer Application, specialization in Information and Cyber Security Recently White House, in Summit for Information Security, mentioned the growing demand for cyber security professional. As cyber-attacks growing sophisticated day by day and affecting all level of society, we have to be just as fast and flexible in our defence. Following are detail academic and professional credentials
I started my career with Company Name “Indus Valley Partners”, they are into IT Consulting Capital market domain. These financial services firm are more subjected to security compliance as compared to other industries. I was associated with Indus Valley Partners for almost 2.5 years, got number of opportunity to working software security. From here only, I decided to purse my career in Cyber Security.
In 2012, I Joined Protiviti Consulting Pvt Ltd, they into risk management domain. Here I got opportunity to work on new web technologies and some core development stuff. I came to realize about security threat like Spoofing, Tempering, Repudiation, Service Denial etc.
I did my under graduation, Bachelor of Commerce from Delhi University. In final year of my under graduation I came to realize my passion for IT industry and computer programming. Then I decided to change my stream and took admission for Professional Certification course, GNIIT - 3 years program, from NIIT (National Institute of Information Technology). Almost completing one year in GNIIT, I got an opportunity with Indus Valley Partners, as Associate Software Engineer. In my last academics, I completed Master of Computer Application from Sikkim Manipal University.